Leaving behind the supernova that is you – overwhelming, exhausting – I’m burning alive in the wake of your eruptions. Distance my ally, a new beginning light years away, I seek shelter in the gloaming.
Trifextra challenge this weekend is: 33 words about a new beginning
That was more lovely than words alone can express.
The space analogy is perfect!
Wonderful visuals and sentiments. So pretty.
Great entry, great picture. No fair. You are a double threat!
“burning alive in your eruptions” super word use. Love it.
Blow me away, Tara!
beautiful picture – beautiful words – I love “gloaming” . . . you and I have similar word interests, I note. :)
Wow! This is awesome. I really love that last part – “I seek shelter in the gloaming” – brilliantly done!
Stunning. I love it!
This is cosmic! (:
Supernova indeed!Wow Tara!I drowned in the passion of your emotions-brilliant piece:-)
Nice images and quite a dramatic writing stile. I like it.
‘Burning alive in the wake of your eruptions’ – great imagery! You’re so good at these prompts :)
Beautiful, beautiful imagery here! I love that last line so, so much.
I agree with Kir. The supernova that was you… amazing
I just am jealous of how well you can match photos to your thoughts.
I agree that this is very eye catching. Wonderful choice in words.
This is definately eye-catching! A very good concept and well excecuted.
The glare is spot on!
Kevin
This was beautiful… And hard to read. The supernova that was you.. Is such an incredible line.